Friday, 31 August 2018


Soccer
Once there was a boy his name is Tyrese. He loves soccer because it is fun and he said it is awesome, he loves games as well as soccer because games are fun his favorite game is soccer because it is was part of his life he started soccer when he was 5 years old his friends all was laugh at him then when he was 8 years old he out skelled them they went your better than them they said your really good they never laugh they said were sorry we will not laugh at you anymore know you can laugh at us know. No that is not the way I do it let’s be friends way not best friends forever not forever let’s be friends but if we can not sit together let’s text each other when ever but where going to be cide to each other your funny as well no you are funny where both funny okay let’s play every day. Let’s go and be in a soccer team okay said his friend thank you.     
       

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tyrese!
    I liked your story about football/soccer it was really interesting,because it had some interesting characters in it. I also liked your story because it was action-packed. Next time you should...Proofread your writing, edit it and...Keep up the great work!

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